Luke Burtons Oneshot and my review

this is Luke Burton's oneshot video, today i was sat next to him as he was editing it and we ended up working together to produce the audio. we filtered out all the high frequencies and reduced the volume of the Franky goes to Hollywood track using adobe soundbooth to make the music sound like it is coming from another room. however in places for few second blocks we brought back the high frequencies and increased the volume to create the illusion that the toilet door is opening and closing.

things i like about this video my video doesnt have.

i like the way luke intended his video to be funny and it turned out to be funny whereas i intended my video to be scary and it isn't.
i like the way luke didn't rely on technology during the shooting process, its simple but effective.

things i like about my video lukes video doesnt have.

i like the original idea of my video, i think my idea of sinister images on screens has alot more room for development.
i like the face my video has an unusual twist at the end.